This is an amazing. Disturbing, but good. The despair just oozes out of it. Good one!

*sob*...forgive me...I'm a very complex being...but ur poems *sigh* u know what I'm reviewing to tell you this is fab...don't kill me..i'll try my best to review properly..
Took much effort not to cry

As she touched him I would die

Killing me softly, as one did sing

Each soft caress a shuddering sting

Not feeling am I while their loving words ring.


oh...*wails*... the emotion...makes me all tingly..sends shivers and ...wat can i say...you are the best author I've come across here. love and good luck. TWilight

Lovely, just lovely.

Bless.