*sighing* Oh, Noah, this poem still touches me. It's fantastic and it doesn't encompass just romance...friendship, relationships, a time when you were happy and peaceful or just... It's brilliant. This poem is. I'm crying already. *laugh* So effective.
Izzy J.

It's really touching. i love it

Wow, what a powerful vulnerable STRONG and sad poem!!

Someone just sent me to this poem because it made her cry. It makes me want to cry.


It reminded me of the poem by Anime Drae http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1420170

Wow. Going on my favorites.

That is so touching...so sad...emotional...deep..soulful...u feel the yearning, the...I hate myself and I'm an ** but there is no way I can describe what I feel right now...but your poem has a hell of an effect on me...loved it..*sobs*...love and good luck. Twilight...

*crying*

Extremely beautiful, wonderfully worded, so full of yearning and its tone so plaintive...

Did it have to be now? Or rather, yesterday? God, I can so relate to this poem right now...

Izzy J.

*sighs*

Incredibly deep and so longing and so... beautiful.
I absolutely loved this poem, but this stanza really stuck out:

"Don’t let go
Please
Hold me now
Make it last longer
I know it will end, but
can it end later?"

Another wonderful poem. Keep writing, you amazing at it.

It makes one feel old and it has a sense of intense longing. Beautifully written. I guess these reviews are getting shorter cause not it's 2:30 in the morning and I know I should go to bed but I want to keep on reading, so forgive me if I don't elaborate too much on how great all these poems are. I can barely see as it is. . . oi.

Bless.