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| Nisha 2005-03-12 ch 1,  | hey chrys. i decided to write u review. has this poem have got anything to do with me? if it does, i am so sorry. i did not mean 2 leave u out. i am sorry if i was not there when u needed help. i regret what i did. i am really sorry k. take care of ur'self. bye. |
| Sarah 2004-03-07 ch 1, | wow... this poem sounds like me... i mean i had this kinda feeling when i fought with a friend... we didnt tok fer at like 6 months! this is... really... deep fer me. |
| deathsShadow000 2003-11-27 ch 1,  | This is a very emotional piece and something I can relate to although sometimes I wish I didn't. You have talent so please keep it up. |
| Aimee Raven 2003-11-09 ch 1, | *nods*...I love this...you make your poems simple but the message gets across...i like angsty poems...this is good, and I like poems i cn relate to...I hate it when some1 who hasnt helped me out comes begging for help...sheesh. love and good luck, Mia |
| IHJ 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Hey, Chris. Sorry didn't review this poem before. Yeah, gotta say I like your other poems better as they're full of imagery and more emotional, but this poem ain't half bad. Like how you typed the title: "Care'less". Not really sure what it's suppose to signify, but it's definitely different. Some missing apostrophes in your poem. (Sorry, I'm in a critical mood right now.) Hm...first you say you shouldn't care about them since they don't pay attention to you, then you say you only care about yourself, anyway...kinda mixed messages there. But then again, that's the contradictory human mind! Izzy J. |
| bitch on a railway 2003-10-22 ch 1, | haha. if ure speaking from personal expearience, thats kindda hypocritical cause people dont wanna get close to you, they just think ure creepy and wanna like go far far away. the poem would have been better if it had been constructed better. well theres always next time. |
| Hidden Self 2003-10-17 ch 1, | gud poem. ~*Hidden Self*~ |
| catanna 2003-10-16 ch 1, | Hmm... can't exactly say what i thought when i was reading this cause well, for one thing it was short. Very short (Which isn't exactly bad y'noe)Actually, i don't have any complains about it. Sounds like ur trying to attach some sort of rythym to it and at the same time ranting off. I think it's alright cause it sounds very expressive. I can feel how ** u are from the poem. But i think ur other ones are better... ^o^ Daijobu desu! |