 The-unimportant-item 2005-04-14 . chapter 1Woah... wow woah...
First of all, thanks for your review. It meant alot to me to hear your opinion :)And second of all, how do you write so damn well? All your work is so awesome. |
 Melissa Lea Night 2004-02-08 . chapter 1bravo namir! i love the passion of the words in this one, and how you describe the element then you have the line that says your love is like it. i like this one lots ^ ^ |
 LadyFire1 2004-01-23 . chapter 1eh, very, odd... quite original though... |
 Rosa Vernal 2003-12-14 . chapter 1good! i love the element comparison, it inspires me (and makes me think of my significant other) |
 teh tarik 2003-11-23 . chapter 1Emotions expressed really strongly...and the imagery is just so vivid and wild, too! Really great metaphorical way to describe your love. |
 Cait (at "work"--can't be bothered to log in) 2003-11-14 . chapter 1 Oh, I liked this. Did you put fire last on purpose? ^^ Deepness, dude. ^^ I'll see you tonight or tomorrow. I dunno yet. |
 Ayanlu 2003-11-06 . chapter 1not bad. I think you could tinker it maybe. But that's up to your heart not mine. Good job, and...I am not readin your entire profile...good lord woman! That's like...a year's worth of stuff haha. Anyways, keep writing, we all need more poets. |
 mizu no kokoro 2003-10-30 . chapter 1lol~ my love is water~~ always will be^^ Oh, by the way, how did you manage to get the picture of the cat shown on the profile? i tried pasting but it didn't seem to work, how did u do it? |
 Insomnis Veritas 2003-10-30 . chapter 1Great! I love this! Keep up the good work!
Huggles
Moonlit Evanescence |
 Victor Soulstorm 2003-10-28 . chapter 1nifty... I like it! |
 KatyGirl1219 2003-10-28 . chapter 1i love it. it's too beautiful for words (but of course i'll leave some, since you did for mine =)) you have a great talent for expressing yourself
Keep writing; never stop!
Always,
Inwe Lessien |
 M.E.Elizabeth 2003-10-17 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 lady-of-the-wind 2003-10-16 . chapter 1Oh KG, you have taken my breath away...you have such a beautiful way with words ^_^ |
 Seras Nova 2003-10-16 . chapter 1I love elemental poems and love poems. Now you have combined them into one! Great job as always and nice word choices.
KEEP WRITING
-Seras |
 simpleplan13 2003-10-15 . chapter 1great idea... excellent imagery... amazing poem! |