hilarious and true.
my favorite kind of honesty.
=]

Not as funny as the other reviews say.
So, if you can ryme, and count lines, it's a poem, just like yours? Right...
You keep telling yourself that...
:)

HAHAH this is so true. Thanks. For once, someone with the guts to say what we are all thinking. Plus, I just love the last line.

That was possible one of the funniest things I've read in a while. (Just so you know, the ads on the bottom of the page say "Signs of Teen Depression," "Teen Depression," "How Depressed Are You?," and "Top Depression Treatments." I think a lot of people on this site need that last one since they think their lives are so horrible when they are probably some of the luckiest people in the world, living in a wonderful country with a good family. :D) I'm glad to see SOMEONE notes the annoying pile of crap people have created on this site! And I loved the last line: "Game's over. YOU LOSE." Heehee! AMEN! LOVED THIS! Great job!

=D Kay
(Haha, you don't have to review my stuff. I think I'll survive! :D)

HAHAHA loved this! you inspired me to log on FictionPress again, though only to review this =) Yup, FP is not what it once was. Full of 'this sht sux but r/r anyway'. Not that I'm the best writer ever but with an exception of a dozen really good writers, FP has gone to the dogs :/ :(

Wow, that rings so true even today. That's part of the reason I avoid poetry because so many emos use it as a complaint box. Well not just them but a good majority of the poems here are just written in under two minutes angst crap about how bad life sucks and so on. If life is that bad see a therapist. Great work though. :)

Thanks to you, I just sprayed my coffee all over my monitor and received a death glare from my semi-boss. But hey, I still love it. You are a genius.

-_- Don't you think that's a bit harsh? People want reviews so that they can improve and stuff. And what's with the mockery of suicidal people? That's a sensitive subject and shouldn't be taken lightly like you're doing. Another thing, how do you know that nobody cares? That's a bit cold and inhuman to say, don't you think? This is a little... different... from what I normally read. One more thing: you should probably get somebody to go over what you write. The grammar needs improvement here, or did you do that on purpose? Good luck with any future works you may have, Miss Slash.

...you rule. Seriously. This has got to be the awesomest poem I have ever read. Way to go!

wow

it feels incredibly stupid to review this but yeah

its all about reviews now

and a lot of the poetry stuff is just a ** joke

if the name of the poem looks like emo **

it probably is

HAHAHA! i can't tell you how funny i find this; we're doing poetry in AP Lang and reviewing each other's work and my partner is doing EX.ACT.LY. THAT...THING! (break/it/into/lines/suddenly, it's a poem!) it drives me crazy because everyone else is like 'oh it's so deep so simple it's BRILLIANT!' as if ee cummings, rossetti, or kipling never existed (and i doubt this person even knows who they are). this just released me from my torture by voicing the message in the bottle, thereby releasing it from its suffocating cork. THANK YOU THANK YOU, a thousand times THANK YOU.

i really agree... its so true, and you say it in an effective manner... i can say that im guilty of posting more than a few at a time, but i see your point... as if posting just to get multiple posts... i think you truly have a gift for writing, and writing in a powerful way... i hope you can keep it up because i enjoyed reading something new, something taht isn't described as "a poem i wrote... enjoy!" and doesnt demean itself in an authors note... i am very impressed

So true, so true. My favorite line was: suddenly, it’s a poem: Divine!

...And you've just voiced my thoughts. Only being slightly more blunt, but that's okay. I like the rhymes scattered here and there amidst the quotes... It gives the poem some more flavour.

Good job! It expres your opinion very well. =)

I'm glad I never done that...I think it was cool how you "delivered a message through poetry."