I almost feel sorry for Tiger, almost ;)lol. This story continues to entertain. I like the "horror" on his face at Jane's approach. Great descriptive writing. Keep it up :D

Where you going with this?
Feels like a simple teen angst set in college type thing... Then again, it's based on a true story right?
Your chapters feel like you should combine the first two and the last two... Try writting morein debth or combine two writting sessions into one to maintain flow.