Well, I've never seen a poem like yours. Still, it's good.

I hate friends who turn on friends...Whoever the hell this was about, I'm mad at you now too. That's right I said it...um...yeah. As angry as I'm sure you were when you wrote this, I'm glad you did and it's very well-written, just as all of your stuff is.I'm not even going to attempt it this time,*Winter*

Wow... Overwhelming anger/hatred.

Does the pent-up emotion feel better now?

Nice style, and I loved the poem. Good to know that there are more people than me who get extremly competitive.

God bless you.

Wow...well poetry is the best way to express yourself and you did that well here. I think we've all had a friend like this at one time or another. Keep up the great work.

i like, actually, and i've felt the same about best friends in my past...(we did make up, however, as friends usually do, even though it took almost half a year just for us to speak again)

hah, nice I like your fire. The only way to excel in life is to have troubles thrown your way. You're not in competition until your losing it.

It's...almost rude to post hate poetry on the internet, since it so publicly shames the hated...but nevertheless, it's a good poem.

I have hated ppl before, your anger is well-expressed. Great job!

Wow. Such fury. So engrossing.

Hmm... You seem to have some pent-up anger at "Lily". Oh, wait; I guess it's not pent-up anymore.

ah... interesting and emotional. lily, huh? isn't it better to keep the person anonymous if you publish your poems for others to read?
it was good, i think :)
keep it up!

Rock! use your writting as an outlet for anger and any other emotions . Very well placed anger

very strong emotions,
well written
does not come off as fake the way that some people's do when they try to right about strong emotions

HaHa...YES...I love that poem...Very good job..definitely goin in my favs...Great!

Wow, you must either have been really angry, or you really do hate this person. Very powerful word, hate. But I understand the feeling...
WM