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FamousOneLiners 2003-10-19 ch 2,	abusei really like the ending of the second chapter, its funnie and sweet ^_^
Cimmy 2003-10-19 ch 2,	abuseYou. Are. Going. To. Make. Me. Sniffle. At least if you keep being this nice to me. Aw, I love my birthday present! And you know I adore Anthony more then anything in this whole world of fan fiction. I've always seen him like a person who always says what he thinks (which explains some of my weird chapters with him), and this is fun. But the sad thing is, I'm starting to realize that he and Cee is completely wrong for each other. They would never be able to make it work. They're too different. I hope I get over that feeling, because I had some good ideas about that. Anyway, back to reality... Thanks, Kristine. You're my star. I mean it. You really are.
Cimmy 2003-10-16 ch 1,	abuseAw, the dedication brought tears to my eyes. Sniff. Another sniff. Thank you, sweetheart. (I don’t have a cool nickname for you yet. I refuse to call you Kristy.) Okay, on to the review... After I was confused by the conversation in the introduction (you know me, attention span like a goldfish, confused like Fred) I found the chapter very... squeakable. I squeak when a chapter is interesting, funny and/or exciting. But the dedication was enough for me to scare the birds outside my window to fly away and find somewhere else to peck. I’ll explain that sentence some day, when I’m not weird. Ha, you’ll never know! You should so write more, like immediately, because this first chapter was a bit uneventful. I do adore the sweet word exchange between Lex and Anthony. Lex is still one of my favorites. Am I allowed to archive your story on the site? It would fit just perfectly next to Summer and Christmas. I think our stories deserve a page of their own. I’ll work on that when I’m done running around screaming because of the cuteness of Anthony. Even though I know how it ends, I’m still looking forward to read about it. Don’t forget to write a bit about the others too. I like them. Even Matt. I wrote about that event in chapter 7 of Summer, with Fred and Lex and Anthony and that... I’m putting it up on his LiveJournal later, so go read... And when am I going to hear that Jeff story? I’ve been waiting quite long now. I don’t have any stories to tell you, but if you want to, I can make something up. I can definitely get an interesting story together, using the words hooker, sandwich and microphone. But I’ll leave the story telling to you, you’re better at it. I like that Jeff’s Italian. I like them. Once, a Spanish guy proposed to me, but that’s not the same thing. And I have my own mental picture how Lex looks, and she’s cute. Very beautiful. She’s not tiny, though. Okay, I’ll give my brain a short vacation now. Update, Kristine. It’s an order. I’m older then you (I’m actually 19 on Saturday, mind you. But let’s not measure in maturity, I’d loose.) so I don’t know where I’m going with this really. I lost my words while writing that parenthesis. As I said, attention span zero. This story has the potential of greatness, so don’t you dare slack off with the updates! One last sniff. Sniff!

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