Beautifully written. :) Keep it up!! Very vivid and very good use of words! Yes, very dark indeed, but deep as well! ;) Please...check out my work again? :)

OK, that's it! This is the third great poem from you
(and it reminds me of what I am trying to say ... I am also light so where DOES the dark come from? Sorry, can't answer. I also love writing about shadows!)

Clicking all three check boxes below.

I swear ... with all you people (so much better than I am) I will be lost on this one site/adding/reading/reviewing forever more.

Forget ALL the books I have yet to read, the DVDs I need to watch,
the PS2 games I have to play
the sun my see-through skin needs
friends -- (cough)
All a waste of money and effort.
All because of people like you.

(what kind of review is this?)

BOO! bwahaha, i pounced on this thing fast. NEW POEM yesyesyesyesyes it took you long enough!


wow, this is like, what...your first poem that doesnt really rhyme? and ACK getting in trouble must get off computer before mother kills me too terriugfrvgxubh