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| Miz E. Mak 2003-10-18 ch 1,   | Awesome!! You really rock at these many haiku which form a whole poem. I have felt this way so many times throughout my life. We're all weaklings, bound by humanity...and you summed it up so incredibly. write on!! |
| teh tarik 2003-10-17 ch 1, | Maybe your haiku whould go astray more often, if they turn out so well! This was just great! I like the idea of it~ |
| K.G. Hollingsworth 2003-10-16 ch 1, | Very... very... astray. But good. Keep writing. |
| freakyfaerie220 2003-10-16 ch 1, | Aw, this is so perfect right now :tear: you write really well, in a way that people can relate to, that touches on things they feel. Great job, YET again! *Trish* |
| HoldinOn2Him 2003-10-16 ch 1, | I liked this very much.This expresses so much to me. thanks for sharing :) |
| OtakuOokami 2003-10-15 ch 1, | *claps* great haikus! I especially like the second haiku. ^_^ *hands you cookies* |