"How will you know I am hurting
If you cannot see my pain?
To wear it on my body
Tells what words cannot explain."

-I forgot where I originally got that from, but it stayed with me.

Your poem is an attempt (not to say a failed one, but just as it stands -- an attempt) to explain what a lot of people can't understand, and that's commendable.

Raw emotion makes for the best poems.
Good job.

You. Y-O-U. It's three letters, not one. "U" isn't a word.

Your. Y-O-U-R. Four letters this time. Not two. Not "ur".