This is very good. If this is about an ex, he's not worth the heartache, trust me. I've been there. Keep up all the wonderful work!

Very good, I can relate. Well done!

Tok

beautifully written
it's really fluid, and your choice of words was perfect
the rhyming at the end was very effective
a tricky subject matter to express (yet one that most can relate to), and you did an excellent job of it

*in response to "Damaged"'s review*
Boo-**-whoo. Cry me a goddamn river...

Somehow I think you will survive this minor rift in your trival life.

Someone didn't like your writing, perhaps you should go cut into your flesh?

Decent poem. I think it's a little vague and could use more feeling and depth. But, overall, it's pretty good.

Okay, about your review to "Kaitlyn." That first part is a total different part of the story. And I really don't know why you said that I suck. Being a cutter myself, that's the truth, no matter what you say. And if you're a cutter, I still don't see why you say I suck. Yeah, that piece was a bit vague and blah-ness, but I wanted it to be that way. I wrote it like that. I wanted that for the prologue. So, I'd appreciate it if you'd think before saying ** in review to me -k-? I could've said in my review to this AND YOU SAY I SUCK? but I didn't, cuz those reviews aren't helpful.

Once again, thank you for your review and great job on this poem. Keep it up.

~Damaged~

So beautifully sad... The last two line are wonderful.

i like this muches!! i can really relate to it, good job ^^