um...i don't know what to say...that was...touching...what ever happens don't ever stop writing

so emotional, powerful, depressing...all the stuff from the dark side. Yet it's strangely beautiful too. Hope this isn't what you really feel.
summerdazed

This is your life

And as yet the life of others

You are not alone

As others cower behind there mothers

You stand proud

Although they can't see

Their cruel words and jabs

Standing endlessly

Be forgiving

Try if you can't

Then place your heart

In a simple chant

The God i speak of

He dosn't exist

But believe in yourself

And you will be in eternal bliss

...Shirley Bassy at the best!

It must be hard to live a life like this, and to live it with so much pain...

Maybe try to change?

Get on with your life, and maybe you will find some happiness, stick around to find out!

Heartfelt emotions, well written, even just a piece out of your diary.

The repetitive phrase worked really well here. I had thought of something different from the title and description but this was still really amazing. It flows so well with such a perfect narritive. Really great stuff!

pretty pink:)