First off I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poems. Second, I LOVED this poem, especially the last two lines. Kick ass job!

Excellent stuff. Short and original and straight-forward.

I like your last two lines best. It's a nice way to close and it fits so well. .

damn

that's tite

geez...nice

wow...that's short

simplistic

biting

shows your pain

good job

keep up the good work

*gives you the thumbs up*