|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| etc 5/2/13 . chapter 19
The "What happens when he buys her for a week" is not clear.
| Guest 5/2/13 . chapter 26
omg! this was awesome!
| Drakeluvpickles 4/16/13 . chapter 26
I loved and enjoyed this book so much that I think I am going to cry now that it's over... What am I going to do in school now when I have nothing better to do!? My life is officially O-V-E-R OVER! I can't believe it's done and gone... I guess I will have to go see if you have any more enjoyable reading books I can dive into and lose myself into. Haha, I guess I Will find out. Thank you again! :D
| Dominique Diane 4/4/13 . chapter 26
This thing about reading stories until 4 am during vacations Is getting me sick ;) but heck,
I love it. You know, I cried a lot when I read about Jonah's past and everything. At the end I pictured myself when she was in the cafeteria, I was exactly like that, alone. My boyfriend just died the day before and I didn't know what to do with my life. Great story :)
| Amazed Reader 3/23/13 . chapter 26
So hey, I'm one of your late readers. Decided to check fiction press out and I have to say that this story completely and thoroughly surprised me. I thought it was going to be a cliche. I thought it was going to be shallow. But you! YOU surprised me. You gave me beautiful characters, a wonderful plot and everything else that comes with the bargain! Dear me, your work is even quotable. You gave me depth. You gave me feeling. You gave me emotion. I know that this petty review might not mean anything to you years after this was ever even published but just know that you have talent. Never give up in pursuing your dreams and I hope you write more in the future, if not for others then for yourself. Stay great!
| Guest 3/12/13 . chapter 26
WHATT? :( its such an amazing ending but i was wishing that u would keep writing
| Lillycovexx 3/11/13 . chapter 1
WOW! Your style of writing is amazing :) I really love this, thanks for uploading O
| Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 21
| Alice in Writer's Land 2/14/13 . chapter 26
Great story. I fell in love with the characters! Brava!
| KendallWritesBooks 2/14/13 . chapter 26
omg. This is so GOOD! This is a really wall written story and it has a great plot! It's awesome to find a quality story on this website... Keep up the good work!
| RainbowLalaLand 2/5/13 . chapter 1
Oh, interesting :)
| Daily Beauty 1/26/13 . chapter 26
I first read this when I was in high school (first year to be exact). Now I am in college, I read it again. I love your story. Thank you for this amazing creation.
| Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 26
Just read this story in two days. I loved it! I loved your characters! All of them! Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story!
| Kathleen1533 1/24/13 . chapter 26
The epilogue was good. I really liked the uniqueness.
| Andramion 12/26/12 . chapter 26
I loved this story so much, I read it straight through the night and now I have to get out of bed without having slept at all! At the start, I thought this was going to just another brainless teen story, something I like to read late at night with my brain running on little energy. But it turned out to be so much more, it had so much depth! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!