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CoolBeans18s 2004-02-09 . chapter 1
Wow - this is beautiful. Just.. so beautiful. Wonderful work with this!
~ COOlBeans18s
glitterjewele 2003-10-22 . chapter 1
ah, i felt like i really internalized this one, especially "return the thought/accept the feeling" ~ i distinctly felt something when i read that. this is a great concept too, by the way. i think my favorite part of it is "i will rack my brain/not my pocket" ~ 'twas intriguing. i also really liked the line "holding memories up to the light" ~ i could just about see that. :) nice work.
Soviet 2003-10-18 . chapter 1
I like it alot, good job, but I think the poems would be better if capitalized the right words.

P.S. I read your bio, so you live in Canada, eh? Me, too, for the time being, Saskatoon, Saskatchewan
The Black Rider 2003-10-17 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Especially that last stanza which took my breathe away. I'm glad you haven't let your busy life get in the way of your talent.

To answer your question, in "The Final Fantasy," I didn't intentionally pay tribute to Frost, but I do love that poem. I've yet to read more of his work. Glad you enjoyed it, BTW.
Brodes9 2003-10-16 . chapter 1
wow, that's amazing, keep em coming haha, thank you soo much
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