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| Ashley the Fair 2003-12-12 ch 22,  | abuseAwesome, great, wonderful, and a bunch of other words that mean that! I loved it. I really have nothing else to say, except that it was great and I really enjoyed reading it. Now, I'm off to read FF5. :) ~Ashlita |
| Salsbury Princess 2003-12-12 ch 22, | abuseone more round since you have it up already. But mebe just do Ethan's story to end it |
| Sky 2003-12-11 ch 22, anon. | abuseI've read all of your stories, and I'm not burned out yet. If you want to, go for it!! I will DEFINATELY read it, lol. |
| JazzeeT 2003-12-11 ch 22, | abuseermm.. ya.. cute ending.. and nathan and marie finally get together forever... i like it execept for one thing.. for a 5th one..doenst matter either way |
| BlearyEyes 2003-12-11 ch 21, | abuseYAY! |
| Raine0211 2003-12-11 ch 22, | abuseIT'S OVER *SOBS AND SOBS AGAIN* This is so sad! Aww! I'm so...depressed. It was soo lovely. Lisa, Samuel, Nathan I LOVE YOU! haha... |
| JazzeeT 2003-12-11 ch 21, | abusedid my last review mention sunshine... im psychic i tell u.. *riite shssh dont answer that one* but ya good chap cute and sweet and a break from all the stress that they've been experiencing.. update soon |
| JazzeeT 2003-12-11 ch 20, | abusegreat seriously but i have some questions...lisa and sammie made love while lisa was all banged up? with bruises all over... im almost tempted to say that marie doesnt deserve nathan just because she put him throught that.. because lizzie was nice.. too bad she wasnt the one... but i have a feling that marie will redeem herself.. *right* lol will nathan's been throught hell.. time to give him some sunshine katelyn... lol and sammy fights... lol.. wo ho.. for the safety of his woman...so the job or him huh? i wonder.. lol update soon |
| luckynumba7 2003-12-10 ch 20, anon. | abusedang you katelyn DANG YOU! why can't marie quit her little games and quit being a jerk and just go back to him!?!?! he doesn't deserve that heartache! she's evil. a stupid **. ggr! and sammy was such a jerk about hte whole job... poor lisa *sobs* well, katelyn here's your review :P hehe good chap UPDATE SOON! love you both tons ALIX THE HOTTEST GIRL IN THE WHOLE WORLD! IM SO HOTTER THEN YOU KATELYN! |
| Ashley the Fair 2003-12-09 ch 19, | abuseGreat chapter. Lizzie needs to go. Hasta. ~Ashlita |
| JazzeeT 2003-12-09 ch 19, | abuseare u trying to make us like lizzie because i def do...she seems good for nathan but i have not given up on marie.. great chap gurls... cant wait for the next on.. update soon |
| MY NAME WAS IN THE STORY!!!... 2003-12-08 ch 19, anon. | abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *hypervenilates* MY NAME WAS IN THE STORY! AH! *hugs katelyn tightly* I LOVE YOU! *hugs lisa* i know you most likely didn't make me in the story but I LOVE YOU TOO! *cough* k i'm done, ANYWAY, yay, poor nathan, too bad i wasn't his date *cough hint hint cough* haha jk, i'm happy, but since i KNOW taht marie and nathan are going to get back together thats fine with me! :) at least nathan is happy for awhile and marie will realize what a ** she is and will take him back :) hehe good chap. update soon love alix da hottie WHO WAS IN THE STORY! |
| passion101 2003-12-08 ch 19, anon. | abuseLizzi seems sweet. I just don't want her to like nathan just because of his looks. That would be horrible. |
| Raine0211 2003-12-08 ch 19, | abuseCASE TIME. WHOHO! So excited. Can you tell? I like these shorter chapters a lot. I like the old married couple...but then again, I would, woudln't I? haha, great job girl. We ROCK! ~your fellow author and forever friend, Lisa~ |
| passion101 2003-12-07 ch 18, anon. | abusePoor nathan. I think he should give that lizzie girl a chance. Marie gets on my nerves sometimes. Like dating other men in front of nathan. She can be really dumb sometimes. |