I do like this... it's simple and flows very nicely. suits the theme of a goddess. well done.

Aw, that's beautiful! :P Very pwetty poem!
You might say it's short but it's definately the right length for me. If you would have made it longer it...it just wouldn't work so well! It's great! :)
And I totally know what you mean - some poems just work with hardly any time put into them!
I've only read 3 of your poems and I just love them all! Hehe! You're a fab writer :)
From Amy

aw, I couldn't resist those puppy dog eyes. I like this one alot, short. But packed a real punch. Me likie

Awesome. I like it a lot. Reminds me of a friend.

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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King