 C.E. Hobbit 2004-01-08 . chapter 1I really like it! Not many of the poems I've read here have been about nature and I love nature. This kinda reminds me of Ents from "Lord of the Rings" and since I love LotR that makes it even better! Excellent! Please check out my new poem "Death" can't wait to hear from you,I think you'll like it.
Later,
C.E. |
 rippl.e.ffect 2003-11-28 . chapter 1i really like this one, i love trees, so sad though |
 To-Speak 2003-11-27 . chapter 1metaphorically, this is how i feel...
beautiful poem, as are many of your others |
 Wasted Postage 2003-11-15 . chapter 1This poem didn't flow as well as the previous two that I have read thus far, and still I quite enjoyed the poem. Good work!
~*~AbunaiChikara |
 Not all that 2003-11-13 . chapter 1I really like this one! |
 Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-11-12 . chapter 1Ah, yes, through humanity's destruction of nature, one will always prevail. Lovely. ^^ Reminds me of something in an RPG I'm playing, but nevermind. Oh: on the 7th line: past, not passed. Yes, I have no life. |
 Kelpylion 2003-11-12 . chapter 1hm, I like this one-interesting concept, natural rhyme, and the perfect pace...excellent job. |
 Keep it 100 2003-10-29 . chapter 1Nice. It was cool to cover all the seasons like that.
~Heart of the Sword |
 double-O-dolly 2003-10-24 . chapter 1touching, my eyes are watering. |
 Ayx 2003-10-24 . chapter 1nice image you have going.. keep it up
Ayx |
 iridium 2003-10-18 . chapter 1Oh, poor tree! Lol!
I think you should scrap the rhyme scheme and make this freeform. It's cool, though. |