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Hell's first Icicle 2005-08-28 . chapter 10
hey! i think i'm off mi high now, and i jus wanted to make a few...suggestions?points?i dunno...so newayz, y is it that nicole is neva with ne otha frends apart from billy n co? soz. i noe having othas, like beth n stuff prob wudnt fit, buh it dus make her seem a tad...oh, i dunno, dun mind me. and anotha thing; her treatment of jesse is a little insensitive, dunt u think? i mean, she noes dat he likes her n all, an she still...well, she dusnt actually flaunt jake in his face, buh it seems like it...=S soz i dunno how to phrase it, and it sounds wrong put like that. ack. ah wellz. and wen u suddenly mentioned sara, it seemed a bit sudden; like, one moment he's totally into nicole, and the nxt moment out of da blue he's in love with sara...albeit rather subconciously.=S
Hell's first Icicle 2005-08-28 . chapter 2
i KNOW i love you! um...eheh...don't mind me -_-; i luv billy! aw! i luv him i luv him i luv him!eh...dw, luv you too =D
Hell's first Icicle 2005-08-28 . chapter 1
squue! hm... i think i love you =D *mwahz*
ForgottenHope 2005-07-02 . chapter 10
i love this story! i'm so glad you made a spinoff. i read both stories in just yesterday and today and i wanted to kow if you were going to update soon. i can't wait until you do. this story is awesome.
Tenshistar 2005-04-14 . chapter 10
I like it. I hope you update again soon.
lilitaliandragon 2005-02-05 . chapter 10
keep going! except i want billy...can i have billy?
Sugar-And-Spice-18 2005-01-24 . chapter 1
i love this story! Will Jesse be back!? I'm in love with him. Will you give him to me?
xWhit3StaRx 2005-01-07 . chapter 10
lol omg i love this one too! haha your a great author ^_^ keep up the awesome work and update soon! maybe is should've said ur an awesome writer and to keep up the great work? aww w/e lolz...
Ashlita 2004-12-09 . chapter 10
I can't believe you finally updated, but I am so glad you did! I really like where it's going and I can't wait for Janet and Billy to kiss. *grins* Please update soon.

~Ashlita
Princess Sara 2004-12-08 . chapter 10
marraige?! I CALL BRIDESMAID!! id on't care what you say *sticks tounge out* damn it has been a while. shesh. yay! Jake and Nicole are funny! heheand BIlly! i love BIlly! he's funny. You better update soon! or me get mad! and mad Sara not nice Sara! (imagine me saying that like some neanderthal..haha)

::Sara::
Tiffany20 2004-12-08 . chapter 9
Hey just found this story. i like it...jesse seems hott! can i have him ;) or at least his body ;);) lol. and who ever cares about age anymore? ppl are sleeping together after theyve learned to walk. no one cares about age or marriage so long as they enjoy themselves;) come on you cant be that pure? anyways good story update soon
katelyn devaney 2004-12-08 . chapter 10
YAY! i missed this story:) hehe good job as always :) hehe i still like Jesse alot though ;) haha think i always will hehe one of those guys who stay with you :-D we have loads of those lol. love the chap update soon :)
katelyn devaney 2004-06-16 . chapter 9
HI! so glad to see you updated. i know im late reviewing but hey im reviewing lol. making my way slowly down the author alert emails and i sawe this and was like YAY! i feel bad but special. Special cuz you updated for me! and sad cuz i didnt review quicker for ya for it:) Great chapter though ;) *chants* I WANT JESSE!! I WANT JESSE!* ;) lol anyways update soon and get out in the summer sun more often so you will update;) lol...hopefully we'll write again soon. i know our reviewers want it and i dont know how we went from talking and writing everyday to barely talking at all and not writing in forever:( but it SUX! :'( anyways i'll talk to you later but update soon!:)
your forever fan, friend and fellow author/co-author;),
Katelyn~*~
Ashley the Fair 2004-05-26 . chapter 9
Hehe, yes I have been MIA (one of the reasons I took so long to review) but hopefully I'm back! hehe. But I'm glad you updated! :) I love this story and Billy is so hot! Wo. I can't wait til Janet and Billy get together. So please update soon! ;)
~the very sexy dork ;P Ashlita
Romantic Chic 2004-05-23 . chapter 9
Longest AOAG chapter yet i think. good stuff update soon
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