cute

once again wanderful. this is how i feel about the love of my life. keep up the good work

"Not believing at first, we parted.

Then the strong emotion started."

I really enjoy those two lines - they go together well and really flow nicely.

Again, nice work! Thanks for your review on my essay, by the way.

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw

Oh yaya way awesome Totally true and totally right laters!

Sammy

Don't quit your school or day job.. you certainly won't make it as a writer or poet lol