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DragonFaeLynn 2004-12-23 ch 26,	abuseOh my goodness! Oh my GOODNESS! That was sosososososososo saad! tear Oh my gosh! Damn! What a great story! tear I'm telling my friends about it... as soon as I stop crying... that was too good to be true! A happy ending as well! tear ** man! That was such a moving story and I'm probably gonna be reading it again, like tomorrow or something... tear that was wonderful. A beautiful story... Purely amazing! Congratulations!!
DragonFaeLynn 2004-12-23 ch 15,	abuseDamn... I really like Li Ming... I wish that I had her fiercness. (not sure how to spell...lol) I really like this story so far and shall continue onto the next chapter. claps hands together enthusiastically
DragonFaeLynn 2004-12-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting... Is it Chinese? What a bastard. I don't like him...
suhani 2004-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abusedid you change your pen name? or are you a different person?
Hyper-Hecate 2004-09-20 ch 27,	abuseI just finished reading this fic and I'm a bit confused. Was the epilogue years later or was it right after she was in Jun's arms? And what was the challenge about? Can you explain the ending to me? You can just email me. But besides that, the fic was very well-written. I felt like I was in ancient China. Jia You to the fics you are currently writing.
aragorn-lover2001 2004-09-18 ch 27,	abusei'm really confused. i don't know why, mabye i'm stupid, but what happened?! when li ming was abducted, was that a dream soet of thing? was the challenge in the dream? or was that reality and it changed? how did seeing herself as the wife end the challenge? in the challenge, she wasn't his wife? was she just his mistress? did she have to start over and win his heart all over to prove herslf? i don't understand how she became his mistress when he didn't know her. he saw her in a ** house a liked her immediately? the epilogue, how much later was that? were they both old, and if they were, how did she still look so beautiful, that was the impression? how did jun know she was going to die and wake just in time? was she sick? one last thing, when the challenge is over, the children are at her bed and jun dismisses them. how old were they? old enough to walk. how did they get that old? was she in mourning that long? it sounded like she saw the visions only a few days after she gave birth. or maybe it was longer and she was just still mourning? had she seen her children since they were born until she woke at the end? geez, i guess i just need the whole thing explained. sorry, i'm not normally confused, really. please email me a few of the details!
ten thirty 2004-09-05 ch 27,	abusevery very touching.. write on! =]
Scorpio 2004-07-15 ch 27, anon.	abuseOMG! That was just...awsome! I read it all in one go! That was just breath-taking! Wow... I even cried when Jun dies sniff sniff One more thing: I don't understand the Epilogue. Isn't Jun already dead? And does Li Ming die in the end as well?? I don't understand it at all. Just mail me at scorpio_khan1985@hotmail.com And once again, it was a WONDERFUL STORY! I LOVED IT!
PinkDaydreams 2004-07-14 ch 1,	abusethis story is absolutely wonderful...i decided to read it before the sequel, and was very happy that i did, because its great! i truly hope that u try and get a novel published someday, because your stories are attention-catching and have really intriguing plots. :O)
DelusionalBeauty 2004-07-12 ch 27,	abuseMOG! This story was beautiful, whith the chinese woven in. very intresting ideas were brought forth in the story line. Keep Wrting, you have amazing talent XOXO DB
someone 2004-07-12 ch 26, anon.	abusethat was a good story.
Zoiqu-Msyjji 2004-07-12 ch 22,	abuseThis is really interesting. I can't wait to find out what she does next. It seems she's in a pretty tight spot, but she's still very calm and quiet.
Zoiqu-Msyjji 2004-07-12 ch 21,	abuseI can't wait to find out what happens. I'm glad Li Ming has a chance to bring Jun back. I hope she succeeds.
Zoiqu-Msyjji 2004-07-12 ch 20,	abuse^-^ Yay! He's Back!
Zoiqu-Msyjji 2004-07-12 ch 19,	abuseyay! He's back! Sorta...

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