Reviews for Wild Safari Train Ride

Neems 2003-12-23 ch 1,	Hey! Great poem! You're best work yet!
Amethyst Haze 2003-11-23 ch 1,	Very beautiful poem. Vivid imagery. Well done. ^_^
suckerplucker 2003-10-17 ch 1,	i have 2 major critiques of this piece 1. i dont think its really much of a poem, more like a description of a painting you saw, but hey the meaning of poem is different for each person 2. pet peeve of mine, but USE COMMAS! hehe oh well, i liked your eloquence zac clownpuppet87@aol.com
Miamouse 2003-10-17 ch 1,	I like this... it has a rolling quality that pushes the reader to keep reading, then the ending... so sudden and final, but doesn't seem to be a complete ending somehow. Lovely. Mia