   Fans'R Us 2004-01-15 . chapter 1This is good. It has a few weird situations, but it seems your average love triangle story. I also saw some tense change, but that can be fixed. I liked it, and I'm sorry it took so long to review. But if you can read my story again, I would like that. |
 KimmyStarr 2004-01-10 . chapter 17I like this story as I said before, but you really got to stop ending chapters in cliffhangers! Now I woun't be able to sleep. Anyway, great story! |
 Craft 2003-12-09 . chapter 10 One question: who's older, Elexia or Saden? |
| KimmyStarr 2003-12-08 . chapter 9 I LOVE THESE STORY! Please write more! It's fantastic!(and not in the least confussing) |
 mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 9@_@ no offence but i am now officailly confused. Anyways, so far its good, i liked, so keep it up, i can't wait for an update.
Ciao~
~Never the same~ |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 7 oohh, more i say! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 5 RomancE! This is getting exciting! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 1 cool~ seems good so far! Gotta read more~ |
 Bitch Du Jour 2003-12-06 . chapter 8Great. Positively wonderful. |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-12-06 . chapter 7 ::big, glazed eyes:: Aww...rad. I love this story so far. Blake=Wonderful. |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-11-25 . chapter 6 NO! Don't cut off there!! WONDERFUL!
How sad...I'm starting to develop a soft spot for Blake...ep! |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-11-17 . chapter 5 This is so...ethereal. I really love your style of writing. I am looking forward to more! |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-11-17 . chapter 4 Beautiful. Just like the previous chapters. |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-11-11 . chapter 3 Oh...I really like this Blake guy. He seems so...sweet. I like it. You know, this story is so beautiful. I really really love it. Please, for the life of me, WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-11-11 . chapter 2 NO! she cannot leave! NO! ::laughs:: I LOVE this story! ::eyes are glossy:: |
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