i felt compelled to look at some more of ur writing. Not bad concidering i dont read poetry. I wouldnt really know where to start correcting things so yea id just leave it as is.

Very poignant. You express the horror of these womens deaths so well. Bleh... The whole concept of killing people because of religious diversity is disgusting.

wow! i loved your poem! i am fascinated by the Salem witch trials so poem really caught my immediate attention...keep writing!

OMG tha was really good….keep writing…
rathe ke rani

witches are cool. lol anyway i liked your poem!
~Fish

Sandri recommended this to me.
I think this is awesome :D

Why am I reveiwing this... I'm bored. I came here and read half your stuff cause I'm bored and i have writer's block... see you at school. This was even good after reading it and hearing you quote it almost every day for a month...

Posies.
Why do I think of posies?
Oh yes.
"Ring around the rosies, pocket full of posies..."
I can see the children of Salem playing to this sonnet.
Rai Kamishiro

AH!
*burns computer*
NO!
ADRIAN JO!! COME BACK!
*sob!*
The end is near for all who dare to tread upon the broken floors of a harsh reality... Uh oh... *glass breaks* *falls* *dies*
(It was all that poems fault!)
er...

You added good descriptive value, it truly paints the picture. I wish the formatting was better on it though, the intervals would look better in paragraph form in my opinion.

first off, thanx for the review on ColorCrayons and my story "In Danger's Path". we appreciate it.

ah, yes, the Salem Witch Trials. where they burned and hanged people who had different religious beliefs. wonderful time...not really.

morbid, yes, but good just the same!

I'm not running away either. :)

Very good work! I like the repitition. When I read the line, "Looking out/From in the flames.", I got this image of a freaky woman. Meh. Keep writing!

good, good. i love the witch trials way back when...i mean, well, i think that they're interesting; im thinking as of now writing a story on em...anyway, this was good. i liked it a lot. (no, im not running away.)

~color outside the lines~