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| Crimson Scythe 2003-10-22 ch 1,   | I'm simply amazed by how well you can write lyrical/song poetry; I suppose that's because I've never been too good at it myself. Even if I did manage to write one, it probably wouldn't sound half as nice as yours. *sigh* That's okay, I just discovered how fun it can be writing haikus. Now, back to the poem, I really like the flow of this one; I can read it all the way through without faltering on an awkward word or an out-of-place line. As always it seems, there is nice imagery and descriptions. *click favorite authors box* Please continue writing, ~ Crimson Scythe (Lanti Arlit) |
| Takada Saiko 2003-10-17 ch 1, | Kirei. I love the idea of dreams and illusions. Well written TS |