Just wanted to pause here because this chapter is my favorite thus far. The other two were all right, but this one was more mysterious and chilling and had much, much prettier language. It just FLOWS better than the first two chapters, maybe because you get a better feel for the characters than before.

It makes me squee and I love it. :D

H'okay, reading more now.

Still love your writing style...still looking forward for anything new...if at all in this story...don't care how long the wait.

yes, yes, I know there are several chapters after this one, but I swear I have fallen in love with your writing style. I swear, I want to mimic, really truly want to mimic, but I won't. I'm comfortable with my style. But I've never read anything like this before. I love it!

And this chapter! You want to know how good I think it is? Nothing around me existed until I was done reading it, that's how good I think it is. Just amazing and spectacular...as well as the other three chapters I've read...even if two are...angstified.

Wow... I thought it was amazing I managed to read the whole thing and i have a very short attention span! It was really really good!

I like the last part, a little more insight to the boys' relationship and the whole chapter gave the whole thing a little more depth. Again very sad and well done.

"Bows" That's very random indeed. However, i loved it, which i think means I'm weird but ah well. Update soon X Your adoring fan X

this is too jumpy...i can't read this right and not get confused with who's who. Are there names?

Again, simply beautiful. Your short, sharp sentences manage to bring to life the kind of darkness that longer, more eloquent descriptions lack. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Short but sill amazing. Well done!

!~* Noelle *~!

...W-W-W...What... *stutters*

Oh. my. god.Seriously made me cry.

Did I ever tell you how your perfect bluntness makes me cry because it's just SO TRUE?

Oh man... this was just... amazing.

Wow, what an awesome story. o_o; Im truely in Awe. Your ability to convey emotion is truely godly. >> Bravo. ^^

Hmm. All those 'some days,' except for the last two or three paragraphs, sounded a whole lot like all of last year. I still love this- But I've got to finish reviewing tomorrow.

I love angst. I love the way you write it. It feels powerful- like I couldn't read it all in one night, because I need a chance to stop thinking so angst-ily ((it's a word... just like angstfied)) before I continue with it. But I'll probably read it all anyway.

Whoa. I really I am just astounded by how these stories grab me. Still, awesome imagery. And I love the weird POV-ness because it makes it all the more cool. I always feel connected to the characters, find myself thinking of a particular person who is like the boy who hurts himself. Of course, it always makes me cry, to think of one of us finally finding him that way... but the way it is written just feels so real.

Such vivid imagery. Beautiful. And even though I caught a few typos, even though it is relatively short, I've forgotten where or what they were. And don't worry about restatements- it is rather like character and story building- adding to the details. I love details and deep characters and storylines.