|Reviews for I Am You|
| daphnegray78 1/29/04 . chapter 1
Awesome poem! I loved the way you worded it...but I especially liked the ending!
| water sprite 1/14/04 . chapter 1
I like the blunt simplicity of your poems, you tell the truth but not in cryptic words or angst like some (or me for that matter) its nice. Great work!
| godawful teen-angst poetry 1/8/04 . chapter 1
Interesting poem...I like the last stanza best. Out of curiousity, have you ever tried sonnets? You seem to write a lot of rhymed poetry, so I'm interested to see ho wyou would handle something a bit more structured.
you asked about haiku...yes, I'm perfectly aware that they're 5-7-5. Spliced haiku was an experiment, literally splicing two (5-7-5) haiku together, one in regular text and one in italics. There's a few other variations on the form that you'll commonly find especially on this site, like "cut" haiku (7-5-3-1) and 3-5-3 haiku, which are technically more like the orignial Japanese haiku. In addition, some people (not me) write katauta (5-7-7) and post it there, or a series of haiku put together around a common theme (I've written a few of these..."Covenant" is one.) Oh, and you'll also find tanka (5-7-5-7-7) and choka (5-7-5-7-5...7-7), which are also traditional Japanese forms similar to the haiku. Just so you know _
| Mystic Rider 12/31/03 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really good. I wish I could make a poem like that, but I can't make a poem worth spitting on. I really like this one. I really do.
| IR sk8r 11/5/03 . chapter 1
Were you trying to scare me? it worked this shits awesome.
| Lauren K 10/29/03 . chapter 1
*shudders* very freaky but very GOOD!
| AttRs Vicious Ley 10/24/03 . chapter 1
u r me, eh? so tell me: if ur me, and u know so much, then why WHY am i such a horrible person sometimes?
| Brooke.D 10/22/03 . chapter 1
wow very powerful poem, i loved it! keep up the good work, by the way i like the way it just flowed right along...
| Kowski 10/21/03 . chapter 1
oh wow. i just read a book by anne rice (Blackwood Farm-it is the book that i based my poem 'grave' on. thats where i got vampires, anyways,) and this reminds me a LOT of it. its kind of eerie. oh wells, i love it. :)
| Queen of Twilight 10/18/03 . chapter 1
WICKED! theres only that to say, this is just... COOL! really, awesome, lol, i love it, like everything else, but this is so... urgh, brilliant work! love and good luck. Twilight
| IHJ 10/18/03 . chapter 1
Fantastic flow, and rhyme scheme, too. The second to last line you have a missing word. Perhaps it's suppose to be "And you know deep inside that"? Intriguing thought behind the poem.
| Tears heal nothing 10/18/03 . chapter 1
wow... that was interesting! very very interesting... but it sorta make sense... at least to me it does. it was really good, i like the way it flowed. great job!