|Reviews for Mobile Consequences|
| James Jago 4/26/04 . chapter 1
A sad and pertinent reminder of why people are being fined for driving with a cellphone stuck to one ear.
| Omelettes 11/23/03 . chapter 1
That was so sad. Nearly brought me to tears. You wrote it wonderfully and incorperated into it quite a few intresting ideas about life after death that I like- Such as, we're only maybe half aware of the physical world after departing. I really liked it. You did a great job, as always.
| Soleil Antoinette 11/7/03 . chapter 1
Poor guy - he learnt his lesson, but too late. Good moral though. Sad yet revealing. Nice
| aqua-angel 11/3/03 . chapter 1
*sniff* such a depressing story *sobs* I feel so sorry for Sharon, death of practically her whole family must've been devastating. But that was a really nice touch at the end. You definitely had a good moral to the end of it all. Great job, keep on writing!
| find-nowhere 10/27/03 . chapter 1
Pretty sad. No tear though.
Pretty much from the beginning I knew the narrator was dead...had to keep reading to figure out why...
| Wings of Dark 10/23/03 . chapter 1
Hello fellow European!
I love your pace and the simplicity of the message. I definitely needed that about now.
| Diana Shore 10/18/03 . chapter 1
Good story as it could apply to anything, not just people being distracted by a cell phone; it could have been a woman applying makeup or someone changing out the cd in the stereo. The list is endless really since too often people are pre-occupied with something other than driving when they are behind the wheel of a car.