all the good ones are taken. Yeah it definitely tends to feel that way some of the time and then most of the time on a really bad day. I can relate to this poem-for some reason I tend to attract guys w/ a huge superiority complex. in other words egotistic jerks -but i didnt want to say that, its kind of mean :-)

so yeah your poem addresses one of the things people think about

"And I’ve festered too much like a sore"-- L. Hughes' Raisin in the Sun? I love that poem to death. And I really like this one. No complaints, here! : )

Good poem, and it deals with a question that I'm sure plagues many people from time to time.

Way too true dude...way too true. Congrats on putting to verse the dillema of mankind...and womankind too I'd bet...:-)

Too damn true, man. Nice poem.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

ohh, man, awesome. trust me, not all of them are taken, you just gotta look in unexpected places.

nice poem. interesting seeing a romance kinda poem rfom an action writer. its a cool little change

i feel the exact same thing...i can never find a guy who likes me. it's like i can only attract dorks! and it's not that i'm super hideous or anything! i can really relate to your poem...please read and review my stuff, too.
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