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| Kohl Smeared Soulmate 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseTrue, very very true and gorgeous which is a plus. |
| TaigaSama 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseNYO!Damn straight! ...I doubt I could live by it though. I always get so very attached.~~TaigaSama |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abusewow. great poem, greater poet. SP |
| A Blake 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseA short yet effective poem. |
| Burondo no Baka 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseyou go girl! another work of yours i completely love. er...maybe you're getting sick of me only having good things to say when i review,huh? well, i would have loved if it had been longer, maybe repeating the last line at the end of each stanza. still, it's good as is, and i'm gonna shut up so i don't sound like a mindless flatterer. |
| KriStiNa 2003-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow..i dnt think that your poem is kind of out of it..lykk ur no express the love you feel for him..put more energy gurlfriend! |
| Sushi-San 2003-10-18 ch 1, | abusethe ending is messed up, but true, if u only adore him and not love him why die for him right. like u said good job! keep it up! please R+R my stuff 2!! |
| Taria 2003-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one a lot ^_^ don't know why I just do |
| Joflower 2003-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's the way life should be, but some people get too worked up over others and then they wonder why they feel like ** when things end. "All goo things must come to an end" |
| Moulin Rouge21 2003-10-18 ch 1, | abuseJust a crush kinda thing then it's cute |