   Joflower 2003-11-04 . chapter 2An okay chapter, but I bet it gets good soon. It's just the beginning... :) |
 IlffMonkey 2003-11-04 . chapter 2you need to write more! and quickly! |
 Ti 2003-11-04 . chapter 2 update soon! i wanna c wht happens next!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC- |
| A. J. Milholland 2003-10-21 . chapter 1 Great start! Sounds awesome so far! Why am I not surprised UR writing a story bout egypt? lol tehehehe can't wait for the rest!
hugs, kisses, and of course, squasslos,
amanda |
 Dez Tiny 2003-10-19 . chapter 1well, i'm reviewin cuz i liked it! lolz... would u email me when u update? my addy is Dark_Princess786@msn.com
thnx!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC |
 loves him 2003-10-18 . chapter 1WOW! LUV IT AND UPDATE SOON! |
 Haute Couture 2003-10-18 . chapter 1sounds good. but how in the world does a two-month old baby play with a five year old? |
| Joflower 2003-10-18 . chapter 1 It's a really good start! I hope you continue! |
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