 Angelic Hellraiser 2004-06-08 . chapter 1Good so fair! |
 Catch Ya Later Alligator 2004-04-21 . chapter 5Wow. Yeah, it was short, but you still said so much. I'd even call it beautiful. Very deep and meaningful. I love it. |
 Scarlett Letter17 2004-03-25 . chapter 3damn the cliffhanger! But I guess I can't really complain, can I? |
 Scarlett Letter17 2004-03-25 . chapter 2That's kind of sweet that his bandmates would give up their dreams instead of leaving him behind. |
 Scarlett Letter17 2004-03-25 . chapter 1ooh...very suspenseful. I want to hear more about Tai. |
 M Welles 2004-03-25 . chapter 5Yay! An update.
I especially liked this chapter, because despite it's shortness, it was really pretty deep. My favourite line is the "Pretty faces and pretty words with empty hollow gestures..." part. So poetic. It's great.
xMegan |
 Sidewalks 2004-03-25 . chapter 5OOh. I really like this story! It's pretty, pretty. I would've sworn I had already reviewed as I'm positive of having already read the first chapters but yeah.. Great job. |
 M Welles 2004-03-20 . chapter 4I really like this story. There's not one exact thing I can pick out in particular, because everything's really well written and developed. Your descriptions are some of the prettiest I've read in a long time. Well done, and write more ^^
xMegan |
 Catch Ya Later Alligator 2004-03-15 . chapter 4IT LIVES!
I was so happy when you mentioned in one review or another of one of my random writings that you were picking this back up again, and now that it's here and I'm reading. . .you've made my day, you have. I only wish there had been more. . .still wonderful. You say I'm good and stuff, but really, you're. . .you just have a way with words. It's really great, I only wish the chapter was a bit longer.
~Me! |
 Catch Ya Later Alligator 2003-12-02 . chapter 3I like it I like it I do I do! I'd love to see more. . .it's not dead, is it? Please tell me it's not dead. I'll be sad. When I'm sad I don't write so well. And I sick rabid prairie dogs on people, which is exactly what you *don't* want, remember? :P I guess I don't really have any constructive criticism. If you write more I promise you that I'll review every chapter, if that's what you want. It's only fair, really.
Hope to see more, and hopefully sometime soon. Nugde nudge wink wink say no more. |