I love that poem! It spoke to me,I will enjoy reading more. If you would like to see some of mine just E-mail me and I will write ya! I write mostly despair,and dark poetry...

*looks really really confused* i didnt really get it?

AHH! well as depressing as it was it was good. it's straight to the point, and it's true. try to make the sentences flow a bit more; not so choppy, but it's good ^_^

Interesting Ideas. Many different interpretations on death but you are missing one...*throws knife at u* it will happen to u now lol. This was short but insightful good job!
pretty pink:)