Please carry this on it sounds really good. XBethX

i love the word 'obsidian' its just so cool!! this in all is pretty cool! its so well written.. 'go find someone to love, you idiot woman' hee hee so funny and cute! AWH! im in a bad mood but ur makin it better so tanx xu gona write any more 2 dis? its just pretty and i love the whole soul mates thing!! WELL DONE! love and admiration Gretchen45 x please r and r my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot to me!! tanx x

One word - Brilliant!

hmm, very interesting indeed. I like it - it's got kind of a lost love/mystical romance feel but also a really dark undertone. you totally ought to expound on this, i'd love to read it

WOW...and more WOW. IU like, aolt. I like how yoou captured the characters and the little rhyming things you did.
Maybe you should keep going.

I'd like to read more of this, it is great writing.

I hope you will continue it! Spontanious blubs are the best! Really interesting! Guna read more of ur stuff!
pretty pink:)