I don't know this "Joey" person must be really special to you my advice is to hang on to him tightly and...

oh yeah give him something special like...

5 lbs. of chocolate.

hehehehehe

I really like this one. I've always enjoyed things that are elemental in nature. It reminds me of a relationship i have. I think you are good at the descriptive parts of it, you should try to do more with elements. There's more than just air, fire, water, and earth, if you think about it. There's also light, time, energy, sun, and even organism, if ya like. Just some food for thought idf you like the idea

another fave. you've got talent.

I truely like the flow of this poem, how you compared fire to water and how you described the two was very interesting. I'll have to read more of your work

Very pretty. I like it.
The opposites, attracted.
Reminds me of an old friend of mine. :D

wow, i like, its really good...

hey... great poem... opposites attract a lot... great similies, but togeather should be together*