Aw... that was so sad. I loved it, though... the description and everything was so beautiful. It's much different from your other pieces, but I like it just the same. Excellent!

spazzycow

::spins around in a swivel chair:: Whee!

That was really good, a nice piece of poetry... BTw- thanks for the speical mention!

dude, that was kewl

very descriptive language. good poetry. sad. but good.
thanks for reviewing my stuff!
Froggie0
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beautiful and very discriptive and long and strangely funny in a way and i don't really know why and are you sure this is a poem and oh wait i think it is and i think i should end this sentence now. laterz!

This is so sad. I love it. The story like quality appeals to me. Cheers, and if this is one of your first attempts at poetry, watch out poetry world!
KitaKat

This is a nice piece of poetry. Keep writing.

Oh, by the way, thanks for rewiewing Stuff and More Stuff. I hope that you have time to read the rest of my stuff.

-Eckrice of Rell

Im adding you to my favourites.

This poem reminds me of Godzilla.

hehehe

this is my poem, and its format is a bit screwed up, but try to enjoy anyway.