I can definitly get a feel of the person you are from this poem. Interesting structure. Cool stuff.-L-P.S. I think you might have meant "loser" instead of "looser"

I don't see how this would offend people. Poetry is about expressing yourself not about expressing what someone *wants* to hear. And personally I thought it was a wonderful poem, and you sound really cool. I think we would actually get along if I knew you because I don't really fall into a certain "group" either. I am just me, just trying to make it and do the things I like. That's all it's really about. Great job on this, and I'm sorry it took me so long to review you back. I know you've been reviewing just about every chapter of "Northern Lights" and everytime you do I think, "God I've really got to review this person!" But it always slips my mind. Sorry about that :) Anyway, thanks so much for the support and I congratulate you on a really awesome poem. Keep up the good work! ~Abigail

This is very good indeed. Full of character. It's more like a song, actually.

I like it alot