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| Ellerfru 2006-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis made me think of a phoenix, maybe because of the old symbolism of death and rebirth. Wonderful haiku! |
| Cookie20007 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abusewow another awsome piece :) |
| Ultimate Schuyler 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuse^^ Ish pretty. ^^ |
| Donnatella 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. This poem is so good. 3 lines, who cares! Your writing is powerful. It truly means something to me. "Victory in death" is a truly poetic line. Excellent job here. You're a great writer with a great future. |
| Franken 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseLove the second line. Isn't that interesting how most people include fire when they talk about love (me included). It's a powerfull mix. Never cease to amaze me. ~~Franken~~ |
| White Pearl 2004-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseA few words can mean a lot.Your haiku says it all in just as little as 12 words.It is very good. |
| frugale 2003-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThat is interesting indeed! |
| Butterfly Radcliffe 2003-12-07 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason this poem reminded me of a pheonix. Very well written. |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-12-05 ch 1, | abuseAh, wonderful as you always are... |
| pippin tomson 2003-11-17 ch 1, | abusewow, only one a few words can decribe it- utterly powerful. Sword in the Storm |
| soulspring 2003-11-13 ch 1, | abusesorry i haven't been to review in a while... nice job on this. your insight is astounding as always. |
| content with rhyme 2003-11-06 ch 1, | abuseAsh is such a beautiful analogy. I love the context in which you used it. There's also a verse in the Bible that talks about trading 'ashes for beauty'. I wrote a song about it once. A very powerful concept! Well, thank you for sharing your poems! You are blessed indeed! :o) |
| PainKiller 2003-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWonderful... simply wonderful. The opening line was brilliant, but everything was just so powerful. |
| Prowling Muse 2003-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAh... How I want the end of my life to come in powerful little words. Sorry if that sounded morbid... |
| dude 2003-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abusecool |