I like this... though kind of funny with da hen.

Thats creepy.. The type of thing i am in too. Hen..cool

wtf? what's with the hen?

Wow, it's like the hen came back to life! Cool poem!

um..kinda wierd, i don't get the part with the hen. where did it come from?

I liked it although did you have a hen fetish when you were ten? Kidding. It would sound better if you rewrite without the hen because has some serious tones to it and let's face it, a hen isn't that serious. Good job.