Hahah. That isn't bad for 11. I like the twist at the end. Er...well, it's kind of a twist. ^^ I like your poetry. It's different than a lot of stuff I've read.

Hahaha!! I love the unique, dreary yet humorous feel in this poem. Good job.

Lol, this was pretty funny at the end to me... well this is a very interesting poem. I like it...alot. oh and although i didnt read your whole profile i still liked what I read... keep it up

Kind of creepy, but I liked it. It had poemyfulness, and was good for 11. I just can't do any poems other than haikus decently, but I like reading them.
It was almost like it had a twist at the end. *brain triggers KoRn's song, Twist*

HA Gracious, is this based off of any kind of true story? Highly amusing, although i do rather pity the parents, they must have no idea what to do. I was trouble growing up, although i was more into mischief that actually being bad, but i did spend my fair share of time in the principle's office. Anyways, wonderfully written!! Cute and rather funny, well done.
~ winter

Its a pretty funny poem inmore ways than one. Keep it up and please r & r my suicide poem. (if u havent alread)
I.C.T

Whoa, what a turn around! Now Emma's the bad one! The evil just never wants to go away does it? Loved the poem!

Great! So funny. I thought the rhyming was a little strange at times, but otherwise really really good. Reminded me of Robert Burnes a bit... hey, that's a COMPLIMENT! Don't send me a virus, please! :)

haha amusing, although rather sad. poor parents, i know i was quite a handful while i was growing up and i wasn't that bad!! haha Anyways, a cute idea, and very well expressed.

anon

This is such a cute poem. I like the ryming scheme, though some of the sentences were a bit odd in your effort to make them ryhme. But otherwise really good!

yay!