wow, really good for one so young! bravo i say x weasel within x

ha hahahah

wow i've never seen so much put into a profile! Anyways... I like this, not the best, but not at all bad.
CA

GAWD! this is good!
I happen to be an alliteration fanatic! and if you write this good in grade 6 (don't have the slightest clue how old you are now though) then I gotta go find more poems from you because you're prolly damn good

Eh...ok but the alliteration gets too much at times and seems to spoil the mood you're trying to set. The long, clunky words make it sound a bit like a grade-schooler attempting to painfully inject "good" vocabulary into a poem. And it's very ambiguous--I understand you were young and this is poetry, where a certain level of ambiguity is actually needed but it just gets a tad incoherent at times.
armadillo

Wow. Cool poem. Like it lots. ^_^

Wow, this is pretty good for an eleven year old. I wrote nonsense when I was this age. Heh! I love the description and the mood it sets. Good job!

i love this poem , just one thing, i really disagree on moonlight being loathsome.but apart from that, i love it! yay!