|Reviews for Fall Laughter|
| soulspring 11/13/03 . chapter 1
such a nice image!
| JJR Meerraf 10/21/03 . chapter 1
Yep! i wish I was young enough to do that again, but heck, I could try to never grow up, :-).
Great work again! Magnificent.
| Keep it 100 10/21/03 . chapter 1
What a great image.
Heart of the Sword
| teh tarik 10/20/03 . chapter 1
So sweet! I like this piece...
| chairmanmeow 10/20/03 . chapter 1
The rustles of leaves
made by children playing
under autumn's sun.
Whoa, made that in like, a minute. All inspired by this haiku! Great work!
| Herman Greek 10/19/03 . chapter 1
nice! nature, life, childhood, happiness, all covered in a tight bundle of a well written haiku. i definately enjoyed it!
| simpleplan13 10/19/03 . chapter 1
nice, compeltely true... i wish I was a child again! excellent poem!