Very interesting . . . Not bad at all. You've got some good recollections in this.

"Can you remember
When you were a child?
When you played with your toys?
And gave them lives and histories?"

Heh - I still do this.

Tenika Dargan

wow very beautiful poem keep posting please comeback for more... swirlygirl AKA thaiswirl (my pen names)

Wow... this was... I don't know. There aren't really words. I want to cry, and yet, I'm not - or I can't, or something. It's bittersweet and sady very true. A moving piece. Stunning perception. Keep writing, don't let your talent go to waste.

~ Moriah