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HeavenStone 2003-11-05 . chapter 1
We love you, Kiwi! *eyes poem oddly* Ehm...as long as you're not serious, it's a great poem. *grin*
ealge wings 2003-10-27 . chapter 1
before I start I apologize if I tick anyone off.

IF ANYONE ISN'T WORTH MY TIME THEN THEY AREN'T MY FREIND! AND SINCE YOU ARE A FRIEND OF MINE YOU ARE WORTH MY TIME!! IF I EVER THOUGHT YOU WERE NOT WORTH MY TIME I'D LOSE A VERY VALUABLE FRIEND! I'm sorry if this hurts but I'm going to say anyway, YOU ARE IMPORTANT TO MANY PEOPLE, (some more than others), so if you ever think you are not important or special or not worthy of someone's time then think about you know who (I'm so happy for you) and all of your friends who really care about you. that is all I have to say
KRangel 2003-10-21 . chapter 1
Ouch. That must suck. Well written poem. Really portrays your emotions. Must be tough. Good job though!
~KR
InkedinSin 2003-10-20 . chapter 1
heh...it's nice that you write your feelings out for your friends, at least that gives them clear meaning. Nice poem.
Adrian 2003-10-19 . chapter 1
I don't know if i've been listening... if i've been too deaf... I try... Am I good enough? Is it enough? You are worth so much more than just "my time"... you are worth the world...

The cliche goes, "I would die for you"... but... I would live for you.

and... i have to apologize too. I'm sorry for my own fumbling... but i do... and i'm sorry... Thank you for being patient with me, listening to me... you've helped me more than you know... and i wish i could do the same for you... the thing in this world that i want most is for you to be happy...

If you need someone to talk to, i'll always be there to listen, you know that.
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