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| IHateMyLoveLife 2008-09-05 ch 32,  | abuseThis was a really good story. There were some parts that were dragged out a little more than was nessecary. Gabe and Isaiah remind me of Fred and George Weasley. They were my favorite characters out of the whole story. Now I'm off to read to read more of your stories. |
| Tagrina 2008-08-26 ch 32, anon. | abuseStarted this story 3 days ago and have just now finished it. Awesome story. I loved it! Thank you for a wonderful 3 days!! |
| Giggles4evr 2008-08-26 ch 10, | abuse"...enjoying the fact that he was thoroughly disgruntling me." I'm sorry, but disgruntling is not a word. You can disgruntal someone or be disgruntled by someone, but the way you used it does not make sense. Please don't use words you don't fully know the meanings and conotations for. Your writing has improved since your last story, and continues as the chapters come out. I like how you're working on this enemy to love thing, with the sarcasm, but have you tried a different angle. It might help you capture your characters reactions a bit more reliably. |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 32, | abusereally sweet ending |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 31, | abuseahaha so cute... loved the mistletoe scene. |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 30, | abuseyes go alex! make things right |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 29, | abuseoh what happened? =] what did the twins do this time? |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 28, | abuseoh whos her date?!! |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 27, | abusecute... isaiah and rosemary are going to the ball together... yes! now we need gabe and ming, luke and natasha, and lastly... damien and alex! |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 26, | abuse=/ this sucks |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 25, | abusei love the reasons that she put in the essay... really funny... and i hope THE plan works out |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 24, | abuseahaha thats what you get for messing with alex |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 23, | abuseha! yes! now she knew what she did to him |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 22, | abuseyess she wants to make up with him... now im wondering what the twins are up to lol |
| righthere431 2008-08-18 ch 20, | abusefinally... she needs to get some sense knocked into her |