|Reviews for A Simple Thought|
| gothicrebal 8/7/04 . chapter 1
Wow...thats all i can say...amazing job keep writing.
| Spryte Andoloni 10/22/03 . chapter 1
oh wow! I love it! Love it love it love it! *squeals* I usually stray away from poems but this is definately an exception!
| Keep it 100 10/20/03 . chapter 1
That was really fine work.
Heart of the Sword
| IHJ 10/19/03 . chapter 1
Good repetition of the lines
A simple thought
Sends me through
A whirling sense
Of loving you/Of hating you.
I like how it ends with "Longing for you". Different sentence structure from the past stanzas. The words "again" and "win" don't really rhyme in pronounciation, but it kinda works.
Sweet and whimsical...