The thought just came to me all of a sudden, and it might've been on your pallette too. (Oh this busy working world. How on earth could we have time for writing fiction?) but yeah..getting to the point. if it were a few months down the line shouldn't Genesis be 'expecting?'

I'm not trying to nit pick at anything, but when chapter 12 and 'no rubber' comes to mind, one immediately thinks, BABY.

It's killer drama and suspense material for the future. could consider it if you still got time. Lord knows it's hard to get up and write these eh? but this could be one of your more memorable 'gang' trials and tribulation too.

The chapters' were shorter, but I liked it all the same! This story was more intense and I could seriously relate to all the emotions and situations! Keep it up!

Wow the 2 chapters b4 that were amazing keep on writing and updating. :)

Wow i didn't expect that. I hope it works out 4 them. Keep updating. :)

Great chapter i loved the whole pancake thing lol. Keep on updating. :)

This was such a great chapter i hope everything ends up good. Keep on updating. :)

What a great chapter keep on writing I loved it. Update soon. :)

This looks good. It looks like one of those slice-of-life stories that aren't written much today. Let's see if the next few chapters are just as promising.

I've been reading your Gang stories today and must say they're quite good. This one, at least, is going into my favorites.

i really like your stories, i think i'm getting addicted which is worrying, but hey that's gotta be a compliment.
two things:
in which story does garland become a christian? or do we not get to see that bit?
also i think the original version of comfort and skin is much better, more raw and definitely more powerful, but i just found it a little hard to accept how quickly genesis moved from being upset to being, amorous shall we say. it just seems a little odd that she went from intense vulnerability to mad passion so quickly, surely a rape victim would want to take her time a bit more?
but that might just be me being weird, don't take it as a diss, the chapter was awesome.
keep writing!

yay! Morgan's party! I like Arizona ... she's better than Paige newai! poor morgan ... hehe ...

Wow. That was fascinating. Chapter 12 wasn't perverted though, the description was so detailed. You should publish a book about the Gang or something. I'm really impressed.

Hey. Okay, you werew right, chapter 12 was pretty uncensored, but I actually (does this classify me as a pervert?) enjoyed it. Maybe they wouldn't go that far on a first date (they could have a couple more innocent, maybe not even kiss dates first if you wanted, because it seems to me they've known each other for like a week), so that's the only criticism I have. Oh, and I have to agree with Red Sonic and Freedman that the chapters are getting shorter, but to be honest, I like shorter and more chapters.

Ah! I love these stories of yours so much! I can't wait for you to get up more. Once I started reading the first one, I had to read the rest, which is saying a lot, because I have this short attention span thing going on. :P Please keep writing and get up more of these stories soon!

Amazing! I really like this story! Are you going to post another one? If so, please tell me... I'd love to read it!