Gorgeous, absolutely "twisted" and thought provoking. The flow of the poem is really good and the writing style is excellent. All in all, great work.

one word. Wow. Twisted Moon, eh? cool! btw, that thing you were saying about Trij in an e-mail, I'm using that as a name, in a second part to my Born of a Storm short story. I hope you don't mind. Trij is gonna be a nice Wave Walker, so no worries, alright? ^_^ Oh, and you sure manage to snag a LOT of reviews T.D dearie..

The rhyme is perfect. The imagery is wonderful. Great poem.

God, that was wonderful. The poem, it flowed, the words complements eachother and none of it was forced, and the probably the biggest problem with poems these days. People force the words to go together, and quite often they reject the perfect word because it dosen't rhyme exctally the way they want it too. But you seem to have a gift for poetry. Keep going and you could probably get a lot of it published.

wow, i like this one! i have no criticism.
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Wow...O_O That's such an original description, a twisted moon. I love how that sounds, don't ask me why. It's just so different from everything else. Wow...strange as it sounds, this reminds me of my poetry, but with slightly more fancy description. O_o That's just plain weird. Really cool, but weird. Great imagery, great use of 'shadowy' verbs. Wow. I'm glad I checked this out. :)

O.o This was awesome!! I love that last line.. Great descriptions! "The moon soon marred by heavenly scars"... really good line :)

Hey...thanks for reviewing my poem "Unwanted" and for being the first person to solve my extra space problem at fp.com :) Great poem...love the verbal imagery, and the rhyme pattern is very pleasant on the ear.

That was great! I loved the third paragraph, I don't know why, I just did. It was great.
P.S.
Sorry for my absence of reviews, been pretty busy in the past, and now I'm trying to catch up with a dozen other writers who have reviewed me also. Looking forward to reviewing you further. Keep it up!

Nice use of imagery, and the 'twisted' view point is interesting. Very very smooth and a lovely piece. The overall impression is very dark and yet a little over the top, which is a wonderful combination.

Bless.

this was awesome :)
wonderful descriptions... i felt like i was practically in the poem :D
magneeficent ;)
*Anesta*

I like the rhyme and use of words really natural not forced...great poem =D

In a word: excellent. But many words are more. I thought that this had very good rhyming and it made me feel something. It was very well written and overally a great and wonderfuland excellent peice of work. keep up the good work.

Wow.. Amazing. I like this poem a lot..