Hey...this peice sounded really interesting becuase I tried to write something about a game of chess too, kinda like this. It was really cool to read the descriptions of battles and everything, and the "checkmate" at the end was a nice ending- it concludes the peice well.

I will come back and read some of your longer stories when I have a little bit more time, but until then...

Awesome story! The details fit your words perfectly! Very interesting storyline.

kloud

This is good; nice descriptions. I really just reviewed to tell ya that the dragons in my story arn't only used as rides xD They are like best friends that are pets in my story, I just didn't clarify that so I will do that in the third chapter.

I agree on needing the description part but it was late and I really didn't care.

-Ama

Smart and fun. Very entertaining. In all the world, there is perhaps no phrase that signals the end - finality-quite like the phrase "Chekmate."

cool! ...that was cool! the queens... that rocked. you're such a good auothor! i wish to idol you *idols*

You make chess live. This is the world of the pawns, of the Queen and the knights, the world where every chess game is more than a game - it is a battle, full-blown, and every move counts. Congratulations on a job well-done. Methinks Ant_sg would love this piece.

Nice story! I like how you interpreted chess into a real battle. Anyway, I enjoyed it.

keep writing!

~jaded-puppet signing out~